The Pied Piper of Hamelin

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The Pied Piper of Hamelin

Hamelin was an old-fashioned little town in a scenic valley once famous for its beautiful streets and aesthetic houses, but it earned a disrepute back in 1284 for a pretty dark tale – a story of greed and betrayal and its consequences.

Life in Hamelin was simple: the people were hardworking and proud of themselves. But one unfortunate day, they were cursed with an unexpected calamity: rats. And not just a few rats, but rats coming in hordes, running through the streets, entering homes, making their way into every nook and cranny and chewing at everything in sight. Not only this, they contaminated food, destroyed clothing, and terrified the children. The horrors were unlike anything anyone had ever witnessed, and they brought life to a halt.

The town council summoned an emergency meeting in the grand town hall, where the environment was thick with tension. People were murmuring with worried voices.

“We’ve tried everything,” someone said. “Poisons, traps, even cats. But nothing works on these rats!”

“We’ll be destroyed if this goes on! We are almost out of our grain supplies, and the merchants aren’t willing to come even near the town.”

The burgomaster leading the meeting wiped his brow nervously. “What we need is a miracle,” he muttered.

And as if summoned by their despair, a figure suddenly appeared in the doorway – a tall and lean man with an air of mystery. Every eye was drawn towards him. He was wearing something oddly unique: a richly embroidered cloak with yellow and red colours swishing behind him as he walked. Most striking of all was the pipe slung at his side, gleaming in the sunlight.

“I hear you have a problem,” the stranger said with a wry smile.

“Who are you?” demanded the burgomaster, though his tone lacked the authority he intended.

“They call me the Piper,” the man replied, his voice smooth as silk. “I have a gift—one that can rid your town of its plague. For a price, of course.”

The room fell silent, save for the distant sound of rats scratching at the walls. The burgomaster leaned forward. “What price?”

“One thousand guilders,” the Piper said, his gaze steady.

The townsfolk gasped at the audacity of the sum, but desperation outweighed their indignation. The burgomaster, after a brief murmur of consultation, nodded. “Agreed. But only if you deliver on your promise.”

The Piper smirked. “You’ll see results by sunrise.”

That evening, the Piper stepped into the Hamelin town square. With an almost ceremonial flourish, he raised the pipe to his lips and began to play. The tune, like the piper, was new to the townsfolk —haunting and lilting, with an eerie beauty that seemed to seep into the stones of the streets.

And then, the rats began to emerge, one after another.

They came from every corner of the town—every cellar, every alley, every hole in the ground. Drawn by the Piper’s melody, they swarmed into the streets, their beady eyes glinting as they followed him. The townsfolk watched from their windows in awe and disbelief as the Piper led the vermin through the town gates and toward the river Weser.

When he reached the riverbank, the Piper changed his tune. The melody turned sharper, more urgent, and one by one, the rats plunged into the water. The current carried them away, and soon, not a single rat remained.

The town erupted in celebration. Bells rang; children danced in the streets; and for the first time in months, the townsfolk could breathe freely. The Piper returned to the grand hall to claim his reward, confident in the promise that had been made.

But the burgomaster, now flushed with triumph and greed, had other ideas.

“Surely you don’t expect us to pay such a ridiculous sum,” he sneered. “The job took you no more than a day. Fifty guilders should suffice.”

The Piper’s expression darkened, but he remained composed: “I did as you asked. We agreed on one thousand guilders.”

The burgomaster showed a dismissive attitude: “Take what we offer, or leave with nothing.”

The Piper’s eyes glinted dangerously. “I’m telling you’ll regret this.”

But the burgomaster only laughed, and the townsfolk, reassured by their leader’s miserliness, booed as the Piper turned and left the hall silently.

The town was not ready for what was coming next.

The next morning dawned clear and bright, and as the church bells rang out for morning prayers, the Piper returned. His face was a picture of calm and determination. And once more, he raised his pipe; this time, the tune was different – a playful, sweet, and attractive melody.

The children of Hamelin, who were still groggy from sleep, were the first to hear it. And just like the rats had once emerged, the kids came out of the homes one by one, drawn to the melody like moths to a flame. The townspeople were initially unaware, but they soon noticed the procession of the children, growing with time, following the Piper through the streets. And panic set in as parents realized what was happening.

“Stop him!”

“Someone, stop him!”

Cries filled the air in Hamelin.

But who could stop the Piper?

The adults who tried to intervene found themselves rooted to the spot like stone figures. Thus, helpless, they could only watch as he led their children out of the town and toward the mountains.

When the Piper reached a rocky hillside, to everyone’s astonishment, the mountain seemed to split open, revealing a dark, yawning cavern. The Piper entered, and the children followed him without hesitation. As soon as the last child disappeared inside, the mountain closed behind them, engulfing them all.

The silence that followed was deafening.

The parents rushed to the hillside, clawing at the rocks and screaming for their children, but it was too late. Nothing seemed to work. The Piper and the children of Hamelin were gone, leaving the town to face the consequences of its betrayal.

In the following weeks, Hamelin changed: the playful streets became still and sombre; the homes that echoed with children’s laughter became silent like the dead. Although the people cursed the Piper, they knew deep down that it was themselves that they were to blame. They had broken their promise, and now they were just paying the price for what they had done.

After many years had passed since the incident, and Hamelin had begun to recover, the story of the Piper of Hamelin lingered like a shadow in the lives of the townspeople. They told it to their children, and they to their children. This is how it ran from generation to generation, just as it should have been, for it was a cautionary tale and a reminder of the importance of keeping promises and staying true to one’s word. Even more, it was a story of consequences that come when trust is shattered.

And though no one ever saw the Piper again, his melody was never forgotten; it haunted the people for ages, and some even claimed to hear it on quiet nights – an echo of a lesson learned too late.

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Khadija Mohsin

History

03 Mar. 2025

Khadija Mohsin

Khadija Mohsin

I’m a young writer with a love for all things eerie and enchanting, using my passion for fiction to craft stories that spark wonder and thrill. Whether it’s horror or fairytales, I let my imagination run wild to bring words to life.

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