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Rumpelstiltskin

In a charming village situated on the edge of a dense, ancient forest, there lived a miller whose tongue often outran his common sense. His small mill, though modest in its yield, provided enough for him and his only daughter, Belize. Belize was a spirited young woman with a kind heart and a penchant for weaving intricate tales of her own—though hers were told with honesty, unlike the boastful fabrications her father so enjoyed.

One fine spring morning, as the miller delivered flour to the royal palace, he overheard courtiers gossiping about the king’s search for a bride. His Majesty, they whispered, sought someone extraordinary. The miller, whose pride outweighed his prudence, puffed out his chest and announced to anyone who would listen, “Extraordinary? Then you must meet my daughter! She can spin straw into gold!”

The room fell silent. The courtiers, wide-eyed with curiosity, carried the tale straight to the king himself.

Now, this king was not an unkind man, but the weight of the kingdom’s finances bore heavily on his shoulders. Hearing of such a miraculous talent, he summoned the miller at once.

Belize, oblivious to her father’s boast, was busy with her loom when royal guards appeared at their door. She was whisked away to the palace, where she found herself before the king in a grand, gilded hall.

“Your father claims you can spin straw into gold,” said the king, his sharp eyes searching hers. “If this is true, you shall have my hand in marriage and a crown upon your head. If not…” His words trailed off ominously.

Belize’s heart sank. She opened her mouth to protest, to confess the truth, but the king was already leading her to a chamber filled with mounds of straw. A spinning wheel stood in the centre, gleaming threateningly in the flickering torchlight.

“By morning,” he said, “I expect this room to shine with gold.”

When the heavy door slammed shut, Belize collapsed onto the cold stone floor. Despair pressed down on her like a weight, her father’s lie now a noose around her neck. Tears blurred her vision as she stared at the spinning wheel, mocking her with its impossible demand.

Just as she began to lose hope, a strange noise broke the silence—a peculiar shuffling, like dry leaves on a breeze. Startled, Belize looked up to see a tiny man step into the room. He was no taller than her knee, with a crooked back and a pointed nose that seemed to twitch with mischief. His clothes were patched but neat, and his beady eyes sparkled with cunning.

“Why so glum, young lady?” he asked, his voice high and sing-song.

Belize, desperate and bewildered, explained her plight.

The little man chuckled. “Spinning straw into gold? A trifling task—for me, at least. But such magic is not without cost. What will you give me in return?”

Belize hesitated. She had little to offer. After fumbling through her pockets, she produced a simple necklace—her mother’s, given to her before she passed.

The little man snatched it eagerly. “That will do,” he said. Then, with a dramatic flourish, he set to work.

The spinning wheel whirred into life, and as the hours crept by, Belize watched in awe as golden thread pooled at the little man’s feet. By dawn, the straw was gone, replaced by shimmering spools of pure gold.

When the king entered, his stern face broke into a greedy grin. But his delight was short-lived, for his ambitions knew no bounds. That very evening, Belize was taken to an even larger room, crammed with straw from floor to ceiling.

“Spin it all,” he commanded, “and tomorrow you shall be my queen.”

The door closed, and once again, Belize was left in despair. As before, the strange little man appeared.

“Well, my dear,” he said with a sly grin, “we meet again. What will you give me this time?”

Belize, her hands trembling, removed the ring her father had given her on her last birthday. The little man accepted it with a nod, then set to his task. By sunrise, the room was brimming with gold, more than Belize had ever imagined.

Yet the king was not satisfied. For a third time, he brought her to an even grander chamber piled so high with straw that the ceiling was barely visible.

“Spin this,” he demanded, “and you shall not only be my queen but the richest woman in the land.”

The promise of marriage had become a hollow comfort, overshadowed by the impossible demands and the weight of her father’s lie. When the little man appeared once more, Belize was nearly too weary to speak.

“This is the last time, I assure you,” he said, his tone almost mocking. “But the price must match the task.”

Belize, knowing she had nothing left to give, whispered, “What do you want?”

The little man’s smile widened, revealing crooked teeth. “When you become queen and have your first child, you must give it to me.”

Belize recoiled in horror. “Never!”

“Then the straw remains,” he said, turning as if to leave.

“Wait!” she cried. The thought of failing the king—and the consequences—was too much to bear. After a long, anguished pause, she nodded. “If I must, I agree.”

With that, the little man began his work. By morning, the final chamber glittered like the sun itself. The king, beside himself with joy, kept his word. Belize was crowned queen in a ceremony as grand as any in the kingdom’s history.

Months passed. Though Belize enjoyed the splendour of her new life, a shadow loomed over her happiness. When she gave birth to a beautiful baby boy, the memory of her bargain came rushing back.

True to his word, the little man appeared that very night.

“The child is mine,” he said simply.

Belize wept and pleaded, her cries echoing through the nursery. “Please,” she begged, “take anything else. Gold, jewels, even my throne—but not my child.”

The little man hesitated, his eyes narrowing. “Very well,” he said. “I will give you a chance. If you can guess my name within three days, the child shall remain yours.”

Hope flared in Belize’s heart. She spent the first night consulting every name she could recall. When the little man returned the next evening, she listed them all: Thomas, Henry, Peter, and more. But the little man only laughed and shook his head.

The second night, she sent messengers far and wide, gathering the most unusual names in the land. Yet when she recited them, the little man remained unimpressed.

By the third night, Belize was frantic. One of her messengers, however, brought curious news. Deep in the forest, he had overheard a strange song:

“Tonight, so lovely plan I make,
And tomorrow, the baby I’ll take.
For none can guess, my clever game,
That Rumpelstiltskin is my name!”

When the little man arrived that final evening, Belize greeted him with an air of quiet confidence. She pretended to guess carelessly, letting several names tumble from her lips. Finally, she paused and said, “Is it… Rumpelstiltskin?”

The little man’s face turned pale, and he let out a terrible cry, “The devil told you that! The devil told you my name!”

In his rage, he stomped his foot so hard that it broke the wooden floor, and with a final cry, he vanished into thin air.

Belize clutched her baby tightly, weeping with tears of relief. The incident had taught her that honesty was, indeed, the best policy. And even though her father’s lie had brought her to the castle, her dishonesty had nearly cost her everything. So, from that day forward, she ruled not only with wisdom but also with truth and taught her son the same values.

And as for Rumpelstiltskin, his name became a known one through the cautionary tale that ran from generation to generation.

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Khadija Mohsin

History

27 Feb. 2025

Khadija Mohsin

Khadija Mohsin

I’m a young writer with a love for all things eerie and enchanting, using my passion for fiction to craft stories that spark wonder and thrill. Whether it’s horror or fairytales, I let my imagination run wild to bring words to life.

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